Saturday, February 03, 2007

=_= this blog somehow has too many of my entries HT PLEASE COME UP WITH A POST... ok well anyway this is that other song i was talking about...this song is really different from my past 'works' and i should say its a first for me writing on this theme. i hope you guys enjoy this song and please leave comments for us in the comment box!

title : 因为爱
如果让我做对比
我想你是新鲜空气
而我则是刚出生的baby

享受第一次呼吸
把生命吸进生体里
从此以后都不能停息



chorus:

让我看着你
直到你昏昏睡去
然后陪着你
在同个梦里

让我看着你
随你渐渐老去
永远陪着你
一路走到底



爱与被爱本来就
不必公平的百分比
不要怀疑
你所给的
我会三倍还你



chorus:

让我看着你
直到你昏昏睡去
然后陪着你
在同个梦里

让我看着你
随你渐渐老去
永远陪着你
一路走到底



不会忘记 不能忘记
世界美丽 都是为你

把手给我 把我给你
一起哭泣 一起欢喜



chorus:

我要看着你
直到你昏昏睡去
然后陪着你
在同个梦里

我要看着你
随你渐渐老去
永远陪着你
一路走到底

um... i know its a lousy title, but i really cant think of a better one... heres where you guys come in! if you have a really good title, feel free to tell us in the comment box. we would really appreciate that. of course, the title we choose will be duly credited.

p.s
i have no idea when the next post can come in since i havent written any new songs lately...theres one im working on right now buy its highly incomplete.

Comments:
hmm.i like the chorus.simple but nice.
 
some strange phrasings like 而我则是刚出生的baby and 我会三倍还你, which are pretty unsuitable for this kind of genre of songs.

i still prefer previous posts compared to this one. as for the title part, you can use 陪着你 as your title. just a suggestion (:


wee
 
i duno if its that my song genre isnt clear enuf or u rly dun lik e words used...cux tis song is meant to be a happy song, the kind that u can either sing to ur gf/bf or the kind that you can sing to someone that you like. in that sense, i suppose the title wouldnt really fit the theme..its a good title if the song was sung in another way, but the 'idea' i have for this song is a very happy one.. (think 恋爱ing)
 
hmm, agrees with wee abt the weird words parts, bt i kinda get the feel the song is supposed to show, good try for a change, though its quite specific to ur own set of idealogies..haha.
 
woo jayli's comment gave me an idea for a title! duno if you guys like it, but to me it fits
 
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